Thursday, January 31, 2013
JCCS Academic Language Assessment Week 21
performance enhancing drugs, such as steroids, shouldnt be allowed in sports. For example, it is going to be a PERIOD, where your body will start changing in a bad way. You are going to start to notice that the side affacts arnt worth it. In addition, if its already a TRADITON you have started you are not going to want to stop because you will be addicted to steroids, and also to winning. When you take steroids you are cheating. Taking steroids is a PRIMARY, drug that athletes take to get stronger, and to win. I feel like you shouldnt take steroids nbecause its not healthy and if you did win, and you take steroids i dont think you should be proud of yourself because it wasnt your natural strength.
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When, you use YOU in your writing it makes it hard for me to read because I do not use steroids. Work on following the chunks writing format to add more depth to your intelligent ideas. Also, add more specific facts. Keep working! (PS ALWAYS capitalize the word "I."
ReplyDeletePS Primary means most important or most basic.
Tradition means a belief, custom, or way of doing something that has existed for a long time.